See..I fixed it for you. Saving 60% web space. After another 25 minutes of editing you still didn't get it right. I don't care what you do. I am non-venomous. No need for alarm. There is no homeland security.
Didn't get what right? My 'chattering teeth' was a spoof, in response to you lot not offering an alternative. Feel free to suggest what Oswald could have been doing in order to cause Marina to think the noise being a rifle being handled.
Do not misrepresent my layouts. Not leaving a break between paragraphs (as you have done in your 'fix') is an old newspaper necessity due to space limitations. Such space limitations are generally not a necessity online.
You say you don't care what I do, yet here you are.
Are you Weidmann's [AKA 'Lord Haughty the Condescender'] doppelg?nger, by any chance?
Go ahead and cherrypick the editing time while ignoring my editing practices. You saying you don't care about that aspect speaks volumes about how you treat other information inconvenient to your agenda.